Mirror, Mirror on the wall ( part one)
The gravel road narrowed until the car’s headlights looked like two thin blades of light slicing through fog. The forest pressed close on both sides, branches brushing the windows with brittle fingers. No one spoke for a long time.
Tyler finally broke the silence.
“Okay, rolling,” he said, tapping the camera mounted to the dash. Its red light blinked. “Welcome back, everyone, tonight we’re doing something monumentally stupid.”
Damien snorted. “Your specialty.”
“Correction,” Tyler said. “Our specialty.”
Beside him, Maya stared ahead through the windshield. “I still don’t know why I said yes.”
“Because,” Juno said from the back seat, “you can’t stand to be left out of proving people wrong.”
Leah’s voice was softer. “And because Harrow House isn’t just any haunted place.”
Maya smirked. “It’s an abandoned building with black mold and good marketing.”
The road ended at a wrought-iron gate. Beyond it crouched Harrow House, three stories of rotting timber, its roof collapsed in the middle like something had stepped on it. The windows were opaque with grime. The whole place leaned, as if listening.
Tyler killed the engine. The quiet that followed had a weight to it. Somewhere far off, an owl called once, then stopped.
“Home sweet nightmare,” Damien murmured.
They climbed out. The air smelled metallic, damp, faintly sweet. When Leah swung the gate open, the hinges screamed.
“Legend says Edwin Harrow collected mirrors,” Leah said. Her flashlight trembled slightly in her hand. “He believed reflections could trap memories. They say one of those mirrors is still inside.”
Tyler aimed his camera at her. “See? Perfect. You sound terrified already.”
“Maybe listen to her,” Juno said, hugging her arms. “It feels wrong here.”
But Tyler was already walking up the drive. “Come on. Before the fog eats us.”
The front door gave way with a push, releasing a draft of air that smelled like wet wood and old dust. Their flashlights caught a chandelier hanging by one chain and a staircase split down the middle. Wallpaper peeled in strips like old skin. The house swallowed their footsteps.
Tyler panned the camera across the foyer. “Viewers, this is where five brave souls spend the next hour confronting the unknown.”
“Hour,” Maya reminded. “Not night.”
“An hour,” he agreed, grinning.
They moved from room to room. The beam of light passed over a toppled piano, a dining table coated in gray powder, a family portrait whose faces had faded to blank ovals. Every sound echoed longer than it should have. Once, Juno thought she heard footsteps following theirs, but when she turned, there was only dust moving in the air.
In the library, shelves leaned like drunks. Leah brushed dust off an open ledger on the desk.
“Listen to this,” she said, reading. “‘The glass remembers what the mind forgets. In reflection, all guilt is eternal.’”
Damien laughed uneasily. “Dude was dramatic.”
“Or prophetic,” Leah said.
Maya looked over her shoulder. “You’re all letting the setting mess with you. It’s pareidolia, seeing patterns in random stuff.”
“Then you explain that,” Juno whispered.
The bulb of Tyler’s flashlight flickered though the batteries were new. In its failing light, Maya saw her own reflection in a cabinet door, half a beat behind her movement, as if catching up. She blinked, and it was gone.
They pressed on. The air grew colder, the floors more warped. Somewhere above them, something heavy shifted once and went still.
In a ballroom near the center of the house, they stopped. The ceiling arched high overhead, frescoes cracked and faded. At the far end of the room stood an object taller than any of them, covered by a thick gray sheet. Dust pooled around its base.
Tyler lowered the camera, eyes bright. “That’s it.”
Leah took a slow step closer. “The mirror.”
“No way.” Damien shook his head. “We actually found it?”
“Or just a fancy piece of glass,” Maya said, though her voice wasn’t steady.
Tyler propped the camera on a tripod. “Alright, folks, this is the moment. The reveal.”
Juno tugged his sleeve. “Maybe we shouldn’t—”
But the sheet was already sliding down. It collapsed at their feet with a soft thud, and the mirror stood exposed.
No reflection.
The surface was dark, like water before dawn, black but alive, shifting faintly. Their flashlight beams didn’t bounce back; they sank into it and vanished.
For a long moment, nobody spoke.
Then Tyler stepped forward, trying to laugh. “Okay… that’s weird lighting, right? Low-frequency refraction or something.”
His voice wavered. In the mirror, something moved. It looked like him, same jacket, same grin, but the reflection’s mouth kept moving after he stopped talking. Then the image changed.
They all saw it: a classroom, fluorescent light, a boy crying while a camera phone trembled. The sound came next, a muffled scream. Tyler’s hand went slack, the camera slipping.
“Stop,” he whispered. “That’s not—”
The scene flickered, dissolving into another image: a flaming shed, orange tongues licking up the walls while someone pounded from inside. Damien stumbled backward, swearing.
Then Juno’s turn: a ringing phone, her mother’s name on the screen, unanswered again and again. Her flashlight hit the floor.
“Make it stop,” she said.
The surface rippled, then steadied on a single figure, Maya’s reflection standing alone. But the reflected Maya didn’t move with her; it breathed separately, eyes dark and wet.
Maya took one careful step forward. “It’s some projection trick,” she said, her voice trembling. “Hollow-mirror illusion or—”
The reflection lifted its hand first.
Maya froze. “Did you see that?”
Before anyone could answer, the reflection’s hand shot outward and seized her wrist.
She screamed. Her real arm sank halfway into the glass as if into cold mud. The mirror rippled violently, humming, its edges vibrating like struck metal. Tyler and Damien grabbed her, pulling. The sound that came from the mirror was not a voice exactly, more like every breath they had ever taken played backward.
With one last heave, they dragged her free. She fell against the floorboards, gasping. The mirror stilled, its surface smoothing back to perfect darkness.
No one moved. The only sound was Maya’s ragged breathing and the slow drip of water from somewhere unseen.
Leah was the first to speak, barely a whisper. “It knows us.”
Tyler’s camera lay on its side, the red recording light still blinking. In its lens, the mirror’s surface trembled again, faintly, and five blurred shapes stood inside it, perfectly still, watching.


Wow.
That's it, that's the comment.
Just wow.
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